hi I'm Ahn
It's good and simple. Maybe a little more color will catch the attention.
I like the color choices, very natural and basic. Maybe formatting the text a little differently could make the name and message stand out more.
I liked the graphics one the first card...you sticked to the same colors!
Overall great job! Watch out for your text too dark to read because of your colors....
Maybe you could put your last name on them if you want. Just a suggestion
they are all pretty good! I am very interested in the first one. no text but showing a mystery feeling.
It's very simple and the pictures really reflects what the message is.
the fire in the second card is awesome
Good Job Ahn! I like the effects on "Ha" and "Breath" maybe if they were bigger? they'd be more readable. Don't worry someone will call you ;);)
fire turns blue...it's cool!!!
I saw your orginal copy. The colors are beautiful and striking into our soul. Beautiful work!
It's good and simple. Maybe a little more color will catch the attention.
ReplyDeleteI like the color choices, very natural and basic. Maybe formatting the text a little differently could make the name and message stand out more.
ReplyDeleteI liked the graphics one the first card...you sticked to the same colors!
ReplyDeleteOverall great job! Watch out for your text too dark to read because of your colors....
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could put your last name on them if you want. Just a suggestion
ReplyDeletethey are all pretty good! I am very interested in the first one. no text but showing a mystery feeling.
ReplyDeleteIt's very simple and the pictures really reflects what the message is.
ReplyDeletethe fire in the second card is awesome
ReplyDeleteGood Job Ahn! I like the effects on "Ha" and "Breath" maybe if they were bigger? they'd be more readable. Don't worry someone will call you ;);)
ReplyDeletefire turns blue...it's cool!!!
ReplyDeleteI saw your orginal copy. The colors are beautiful and striking into our soul. Beautiful work!
ReplyDelete